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Okay, so I'm sure many of the people on this site are dying to know what my reaction the the fourth and final book. Well, I haven't been keeping track of all my comments because there are SOOOO MANY but...I'm sure you want to find out.
You may notice, I have not added a page for Renesmee, reasons which are explained here.
Ladies and Gentlemen, let me present to you my reaction to Breaking Dawn:
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OMG. i hated breaking dawn. well ok some parts were ok. but i hate RENESMEE!!!haha. well...i hate her b/c SM said bella and edward's love was really special because she COULD give up all those things for edward like charlie, jacob, and having kids. but in the end, their love wasn't special at all, because she got jacob, charlie...AND THE FRICCIN KID!that's like SM contradicting herself. i mean, most of the book was about edward and bella, and then jacob and bella, and i hate how she tacked on a dumb mary sue child, and bella's love for the child overshadows her love for EVERYONE else. it feels like the series was always about her now, and bella was pulled towards edward just because of fate, and she would someday get renesmee....and jacob was only pulled toward bella because HE would get renesmee someday. it's kinda freaky, but she controls the whole series now even though she wasn't born then. i hate it! also, the way jacob was pulled towards nessie towards fate...it doesn't make sense! SM said herself that the future isn't set in stone! again, she contradicts herself! GAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!! stupid woman! hahahaha jk jk.
i liked how before it was like a perfect utterly georgeous vampire who's life tangles (in 2 ways lol my lil joke) w/ an ordinary girl, but one mary sue is enough! don't you think? it's all ruined now w/ a stupid child.also, i thought that jacob imprinting on renesmee was unnatural. he's a WEREWOLF, the mortal enemy of the vampire, born to protect the land from vampires...how the hell did he imprint on a mutant VAMPIRE??!!!
seriously. and don't you think that edward is overprotective enough to want to wear a condom, so that bella doesn't end up burning up!!! (by burning up, i mean he could have squirted venom into her system for all we know...). sm wrote breaking dawn right after twilight (she called it forever dawn then) and her publishers told her not to publish it yet; instead she should develop the characters more.so she did it - and i think she did a really good job of it - and because of all the stuff that happens in new moon and eclipse, breaking dawn no longer applies! I mean, a lot of characters were seriously ooc beyond repair in breaking dawn. the editors still thought she shouldn't publish it, but she pushed, until she got it published. seriously, it's like the editors didn't touch the book! there are so many grammatical errors.and also, in chapter 3, bella makes charlie PANCAKES for breakfast and then after a few sentences, he scowls @ his CEREAL BOWL. it plainly shows lack of editing. the editors were probably like "screw it, at least we get the money." LOL. also, i hate how the volturi just walked away! i wanted an EPIC SHOWDOWN! jesus! and i hate how bella just used edward 2 have sex and just goes to renesmee, and i hate how edward seems not to really like renesmee and care about her as much as he cares about bella (he's her father for crying out loud), and i think she foreshadowed the book a LOT with edward complaining about how he wishes he had a shotgun wedding...ugh!!! and i hate how sm involved the incubus myth, and all the sex scenes...faded...to...black............................and i hate it it was just stupid!!! especially the honeymoon thing, which was worse than ALLL fanfictions in the world (i thought it was a prank when i read the leaked version) and bella is worse than ever and it's just STUPID!!!
and maybe i'm too negative so i'll say what i liked...even though a lot of people hated "first hunt" i liked it...bella being a mary sue was less annyoing to me than most people..she deserves it, i think, after so long of being clumsy, mediocre, and frail.
anyways, basically i liked all parts that didn't have to do with dumb renesmee. and i did like jake and rosalie's arguements...i loved jake until he imprinted on that DUMB BABY!!! anyways, feel free 2 comment!!!!
